DramatisPersonae Posted January 19, 2006 Report Posted January 19, 2006 Waste ye not, not one drop, drink my red, with your eyes where doth once love abide. Haste me not, for I’ll fall, across this life, a lost soul, in my body my love grows old. Grow shall not, not one rose, for garden I’ve sacrificed, for moss and mold. But rise from ashes Phoenix fiery and bold! And not one, but two, Both in their loves scold, Return to fulfil the prophecy untold: Two become one, stronger than before.
Милица Posted January 22, 2006 Report Posted January 22, 2006 (edited) Fantasticno... Zaista mi se dopada... Pa jos motiv Feniksa koji se radja iz sopstvenog pepela...i to onda dva Feniksa... Zaista lepo... EDIT:zasto si stavio ovog smajlija kome se povraca i ono 'umph' ili sta vec za podnaslov,dobra je pesma jebote... Edited January 22, 2006 by Beauty In Black
DramatisPersonae Posted January 22, 2006 Author Report Posted January 22, 2006 Pa pazi, pesma je previshe "laka" prozimajuci neke vec pomenute i opshte poznate slike i situacije, pa se chak ni ne obracam na neku metaforu, neko znachenje, neshto shto treba da bude neshto. To je samo olako napisano u trenutku jedne pozne vecheri lezeci na kauchu kod druga koji je drko neshto u AutoCad-u... pesmica je pisana dok je pichio Saturnus, a i gledao sam da bude shto ritmichnija... To ne valja.
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