AnaLizator Posted April 19, 2006 Report post Posted April 19, 2006 IN THE WANING SUN'S EYE Perpetualy stinging sensation, a harm that dwelleth me, Hark I the whispering glades, tho my senses fail me... I muse over thine extent, the harlot that you be, entranced me once and never failed the dominant grasp... twilight that cometh my way, a chant we never hear until we are to depart.. until we are to pass away... Abandon me, regret cruel, take thee the woes away, yonder the life goes, whence thy sorrow dares not... Perpetualy stinging sensation, a harm that dwelleth me, Hark I the whispering glades, tho my senses fail me... twilight that cometh my way, a chant we never hear until we are to depart.. until we are to pass away... elem, morao sam ovo da postujem, dunula mi pesma onako, kad sam je ponovo citao, vristao sam od smeha... Ignorisacu komentare o gramatici (ako vam smeta FUK JU MEN sto bi rek'o onaj na snimku Patarena...) a i svaka slicnost sa W.Blakeom je slucajna... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vresište Posted April 22, 2006 Report post Posted April 22, 2006 Uz duzhno poshtovanje ne laskaj sebi, Daleko si josh od Blakea...A shto se tiche perpetually stinging sensationa pokushaj da nadjesh malo sretnije sinonime (zvuchi kao da si kod doktora i zhalish se na bolove)...Al` 10 za trud. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnaLizator Posted April 24, 2006 Report post Posted April 24, 2006 Pa nisam se poredio kvalitativno sa Blejkom vec onako, fore radi, tipa lici ko sto Jugo lici na auto... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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