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The Eastern Eclipse

 

 

They came with the rising sun

Early as the sky was dark

Flames of new day were

In the shade of a mighty gun

 

You thought war is over?

Again they are rising from dead

Last hope or new taste of defeat?

No time to think, just take cover!

 

Terror of Lucifer’s smile

charges this stormy day

I’ve already give omen

They are now erased, just part of the file.

 

Animal instinct is highlight of each been

The signs of thunder are making my mind darker

In the coma of fears, deep inside

I’ve know this is already seen.

 

It’s like the first kill

To return back is all I need

But no one will understand

No one know what do I feel

 

The truth is

In the ruins of city

The truth is

In the eyes of defenders

 

When you hear voices giving ode to a new day

When you see the ecstasy of staying live

You will understand the meaning of the life

 

Eastern eclipse- sacrifice of men

Chance to forgive and chance to awake

Voices of dark ages- writing new pages

Golden ideals are moving away

 

thrash till death\m/ odlican lyric

ostavi da ti ovo bude refren

Eastern eclipse- sacrifice of men

Chance to forgive and chance to awake

Voices of dark ages- writing new pages

Golden ideals are moving away

Jbg. ne dira me...(valjda zbog gramatike i stila i opshteg utiska...)

Izvini.

 

Edited November 5, 200618 yr by matatrtaDgrejt

Hvala obojici na kritikama i predlozima.

Naravno, matatrtaDgrejt nema potrebe da se izvinjavas. Ovo je, da se tako izrazim, beta verzija, a znam da treba da proradim na gramatici i stilu.

Jos jednom hvala, pa se vidimo negde u vremenu

 

 

 

 

SacrilegiouS off

 

 

Edited November 6, 200618 yr by SacrilegiouS