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Ivan_Creed

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Dark sunset catches me,

rain prepares to fall

I know I am loosing you

and that was all...

atmosphere of fresh moist air of incoming night takes my sense,

I know I lost my only chance

leaving my home, going out, you are in my mind

it was a mistake all along, we ain't same kind

you are coming in waves, visiting me,

losing my breath, another depression attack

is a serious threat

walking places where we past,

you're dark and mystic

it was too good to last,

now with your trips and new person

you are finding your way

I was too happy,

now it is a price to pay

great contrast in emotion

I see you in every sleepless night

you aproach me - I just can't fight

I put myself together after all,

with good old despise

I'll have to walk tall...

 

 

... my gift to Veronika....

Edited by Ivan_Creed

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Mora i to neko... nego, skrenusmo sa teme....

Pored iscekivanja rezolucije Vjeronicine, mozda postujem jos neko dJelo.... za sada, ne zelim 'sebe' komentarisati.

Forma je ok, zanima me sta bi Lesi rekao na ovaj pokusaj trash-a... ph34r.gif

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pozdrav sa dzabe interneta gde trenutno punim telefon. na exitu je do jaja. kamp je sredjeniji nego ranije, a urbani smradovi su sinoc i nocas rayvalili.

sto se teme tice, nisam pazljivo citao, ali ste uvredljivi preko svake mere. zabava je zavrsena. dodjite na exit. hvala na paznji.

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