Grain of Dust

 

No one told me about it

the day I slamed that wooden door,

how I was gonna find it

we told our lies long time before.

 

Once we gonna meet again

on this endless bloodie road,

grain of dust beaneath the stain

looking for the truth facing the flood.

 

Poor,poor and helpless

poor,poor,poor....

all those years

and all those dreams

was it realy worth

being so alone

poor ....

 

Does it something mean to you

although you re caryng that empty head

someone already pushed the buton,,

but I am tired of being sad.

 

But I could have never understand

why we are caryng these heavy bags

do you realy think that we'd still belong to some land

if we'd have put dawn the flags.

 

Nema komentara? Cudno...

... mene mrzelo da postujem, posto sam obecao sebi da necu da dajem lose komentare ...

 

Bloody se pise krvavo

 

Beneath se pise ispod

 

I slammed se pise zalupiti.

 

I moguce je da ima jos koja greska u kucanju, nisam primetio ...

 

Jel' ti to sazaljevas sebe u ovoj pesmi?

 

Lepa majica na avataru .

Edited March 11, 200718 yr by Anarki StarScream

Mrzelo me da ispravljam kad sam prekucao....

Manje vise to, odgovori na pitanje.

 

Ti to sebe sazaljevas u pesmi?

Ne, ne sazaljevam, mozda tako ti se cini, ali odgovor je negativan...

Ne, ne sazaljevam, mozda tako ti se cini, ali odgovor je negativan...

 

En general pesma mi se svidja... jesdnostavna je.

Dobar text za neku doom-goth-pesmu?

probaj da izbegavas direktne rime. bad sad, understand,land.

postoji rima po sluhu, a kada to koristis, siri je dijapazon reci koje mozes da koristis, a samim tim, mozes biti mnogo originalniji.

 

pozz

I pokusaj da razmisljas na engleskom kada pises na engleskom. Ovo je samo srpski sa drugim recima.

Mama I miss you tonight

 

Maybe I'm not the one that

You wanted me to be,

Sometimes I just feel so lonely,

although I feel free.

 

Time has left the marks,

And you can see them in the light,

Mother I miss you tonight,

 

I know daddy is now working all day long,

you are gettin' trough and I wish I was that strong,

it's our kitchen that you are in,

and I know you're alright.

Mother I miss you tonight.

 

I'm in a foreign land,

And I know you'd understand,

The way I feel is ussual,

Somethimes I just need you as a friend.

 

Sombody as you to talk,

Not to argue or to fight.

Mother I miss you tonight.

 

I've hurt so many people,

But I've been hurted too,

And I'm greatfull to the God,

He's takin' care of you,

I shouldn't work that much,

I need some time to write,

Mother I miss you tonight