Deftone Posted June 2, 2006 Report post Posted June 2, 2006 I gde dusa moja !? U hladnoj utrobi sebicnosti i besmisla Uvaljana u krv hladnu od samoljublja Pokorena tamom, osudjena trajanjem I gde plac i bol, za koga !? Za nju! I gde dusa moja !? Pljuvana, koriscenja, cepana, placena Kome na prag kucni ? Ima li doma ? I gde plac i bol, za koga !? Za nju! I nema duse, nema doma kraja, tame, svetala, sveta nema Postoji samo secanje, prljavo i nezeljeno Obelezeno bolom, mirise na ljubav I gde plac i bol, za koga !? Za nju! POSEVECENO IVANI (Creative Romance) Pateticno zar ne? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JD Seven Posted June 3, 2006 Report post Posted June 3, 2006 jbg Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vresište Posted June 3, 2006 Report post Posted June 3, 2006 Ah, ja verovatno ne bi trebalo da postujem ovde jer mi je dusha prljava k`o rudarev donji vesh, al` `ajde... Pa ako ti je neka uteha - mnogo bolje pishesh od nje. A riba se uvaljala u samoljublje do te mere da izgleda da joj nije bitno da li je u pravu nego samo koliko misli da je u pravu. Verovatno ste delili jednu istinsku stvar - oboje ste voleli nju...prebolechesh, javiche ti se samo kad porastesh... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Platina Posted June 3, 2006 Report post Posted June 3, 2006 Ja o njoj nikad ne bi pisala pesme... Ali pesma nije loša uopšte... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blasphemer Posted June 3, 2006 Report post Posted June 3, 2006 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted June 4, 2006 Report post Posted June 4, 2006 Hhahahahahhhaah, kakav kreativni talas! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
blondie Posted June 4, 2006 Report post Posted June 4, 2006 meni je ovo zabavno i cak mi se svidja. bas mu je puk`o film. energicno - i neusiljeno a to je ipak nesto. primjecujem da covjek ima neke frke s fotnovima, nek mu neko pomogne. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGGRESSOR55 Posted June 4, 2006 Report post Posted June 4, 2006 (edited) a taj plac je bio miraz? a jel bila kuca na placu? EDIT: Vidim, naucio si da pises pa su textovi izgubili originalnost Edited June 4, 2006 by AGGRESSOR55 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Creative_Romance> Posted June 5, 2006 Report post Posted June 5, 2006 ...zar nije? ...zar je bilo potrebno za tom pesmom? i ko si ti uopste? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inuria Malkava Posted June 5, 2006 Report post Posted June 5, 2006 ...zar nije? ...zar je bilo potrebno za tom pesmom? i ko si ti uopste? 1. Kaze se "bilo potrebe", a ne "bilo potrebno" u ovoj recenici. 2. A i nisi ti tu da odredjujes da li za pesmom ima ili nema potrebe, vec da je komentarises. 3. I autor pesme ili bilo ko koga si pitala "i ko si ti uopste?" bi to trebalo da iznese u profilu ako zeli. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Creative_Romance> Posted June 6, 2006 Report post Posted June 6, 2006 (edited) I gde dusa moja !? U hladnoj utrobi sebicnosti i besmisla Uvaljana u krv hladnu od samoljublja Pokorena tamom, osudjena trajanjem I gde plac i bol, za koga !? Za nju! I gde dusa moja !? Pljuvana, koriscenja, cepana, placena Kome na prag kucni ? Ima li doma ? I gde plac i bol, za koga !? Za nju! I nema duse, nema doma kraja, tame, svetala, sveta nema Postoji samo secanje, prljavo i nezeljeno Obelezeno bolom, mirise na ljubav I gde plac i bol, za koga !? Za nju! POSEVECENO IVANI (Creative Romance) Pateticno zar ne? ...i ponovo mrak ...lavirint grubih reci i ponovo teturam u magli ...secanje i bol Poslednji krik slomljenog srca nudim tvojim usnama i hodnicima tvojih misli Poslednji put molim za tebe, nudim hladne ruke i suzama okupane oci Poslednji put preklinjem sujetu, nudim slomljenu dusu i strahom prozeta krila ...i ponovo mrak ...lavirint bezbojnog glasa i ponovo teturam u magli ...secanje i bol Edited June 6, 2006 by <Creative_Romance> Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vresište Posted June 6, 2006 Report post Posted June 6, 2006 @ vrlo emotivno nestabilno stvorenje.... Elem, Ovo je forum - dakle jedna varijanta virtuelne stvarnosti. Svi koji dolaze ovde dolaze da bi ubili dosadu, tako da chitavu ovu prichu tako treba i prihvatiti. Ako te ova sranja pogadjaju - teshko tebi u privatnom zhivotu.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Creative_Romance> Posted June 6, 2006 Report post Posted June 6, 2006 ...ponekad se zapitam koliko jos besmislenih reci ce vam trovati vec zatvoren um?! ...ponekad se zapitam dokle cete suditi sopstvenoj neiformisanosti i pokazivati maske jakih, nedodirljivih...?! ...oci vam sirom otvorene a tako slepe...! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vresište Posted June 6, 2006 Report post Posted June 6, 2006 Hm, Vidim umemo s metaforama...da si dala komentar na avatar direktno sad bi SSmoreck popizdela... Btw., ovo ti sve mnogo bolje ide na Srpskom...aj sad zdr`! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deftone Posted June 7, 2006 Report post Posted June 7, 2006 ONE LOVE! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGGRESSOR55 Posted June 8, 2006 Report post Posted June 8, 2006 dame i gospodo, prisustvujemo freestyle battle-u izmedju mc creative romance i mc deftone-a say yeah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baal Posted June 8, 2006 Report post Posted June 8, 2006 Ko radi matrice? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grobodan Posted June 8, 2006 Report post Posted June 8, 2006 O,ti chista duso Moj ti u dupe usho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baal Posted June 8, 2006 Report post Posted June 8, 2006 Slobo, pičko stara, imaš problem sa tagom u potpisu (SIZE=7). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grobodan Posted June 8, 2006 Report post Posted June 8, 2006 Srce si,nikad ne bih primetio. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baal Posted June 9, 2006 Report post Posted June 9, 2006 Čista mi je duša, pa sam zbog toga primetio. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blacksunray Verb Delikvent Posted June 9, 2006 Report post Posted June 9, 2006 kakva je to apokaliptichna silueta na avataru.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baal Posted June 9, 2006 Report post Posted June 9, 2006 Omot albuma Porcupine Tree - Deadwing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen Posted June 9, 2006 Report post Posted June 9, 2006 Jebali vas avatari!!!!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vitamin K Experience Posted June 9, 2006 Report post Posted June 9, 2006 Osećam seksualni naboj u tvojoj poruci. Mora da je to zato što sam emotivan. Deftone, želim ti brzo ozdravljenje. Odvali Textures ili Močugu. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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