SelfHandOfGod Posted April 23, 2006 Report post Posted April 23, 2006 Tonem polako ali sigurno, Osecam to duboko u sebi, Vise nema srecnih i nasmejanih lica, Niko vise ne ide na vasar, Ljudi su ovde cudni,tudji Niko se ne veseli... Video sam danas na televiziji, Ponovo se ubijaju, Strasne scene koje ni covek ne moze da zamisli, Ja nisam ni tamo ni ovde, Nepripadam nigde, Ja sam mrvica hleba koja stoji na stolu vec nedeljama, Svugde pogledi mrki, Niko se cak vise i ne stidi, Ulice su sive vazduh lepljiv, Zamagljene su mi oci vise i ne vidim kako treba, A sta tu i ima da se vidi.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helle Posted April 25, 2006 Report post Posted April 25, 2006 (edited) Mljac za awatar! .... gime gime gimeeee! Lagano Padam, psiHooooooooo.... ps: Super ti ova pijesmica, bas je kjut! Edited April 25, 2006 by Hellenoranotos Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azizam Posted April 26, 2006 Report post Posted April 26, 2006 (edited) Čudan uvod, međutim sviđa mi se, sveukupno pesma prenosi poruku i prenosi određenu emociju. Imaš potencijala. Edited April 26, 2006 by Parvati_Veshtica Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SelfHandOfGod Posted April 27, 2006 Report post Posted April 27, 2006 Čudan uvod, međutim sviđa mi se, sveukupno pesma prenosi poruku i prenosi određenu emociju. Imaš potencijala. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen_of_the_ryche Posted April 27, 2006 Report post Posted April 27, 2006 (edited) Poradi malkice na gramatici...moze bolje to...znam Sorry za gramatiku...malo mi to bode oci...ipak sam ja filolog, imam neodoljivu zelju da ispravljam ljude...he, he... Edited April 27, 2006 by Queen_of_the_ryche Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SelfHandOfGod Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 Poradi malkice na gramatici...moze bolje to...znam Sorry za gramatiku...malo mi to bode oci...ipak sam ja filolog, imam neodoljivu zelju da ispravljam ljude...he, he... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peti.Maj Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 Malo me podsjeca na Ekv pjesmu Tonemo i Par godina za nas ali mozda je tek koincidencija. Ne vidim ni jednu gramaticku gresku tako da ne znam cemu zamjerke povodom toga. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGGRESSOR55 Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 block out fazon, moze da prodje Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SelfHandOfGod Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 (edited) pa i pisana je u fazonu block out-a Edited April 28, 2006 by SelfHandOfGod Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 Malo me podsjeca na Ekv pjesmu Tonemo i Par godina za nas ali mozda je tek koincidencija. Ne vidim ni jednu gramaticku gresku tako da ne znam cemu zamjerke povodom toga. Nepripadam nigde==== npr! NE PRIPADAM! Zhao mi je, nema veze sa prepotentnoshcu, ali.... morash paziti na gramatiku, ako zhelish da se bavish pisanjem Inache- pesma mi se i ne dopada preterano. Nije losha ideja. ALi da je potpuno drugachije razradjna. Toliko. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peti.Maj Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 To mi je promaklo, ali sad kad pogledam vise mi djeluje kao lapsus, jer u nekom od sledecih stihova kaze: "ne stidi" a zatim i "ne vidim". Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
...m... Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 e, glupa sam...a, i davno izasla iz skole...ali kada vec cepidlacimo zar 'nepripadamo' nije pravopisna, a ne gramaticka greska.... Elem....pesma...ne znam...ne razumem se ja mnogo u te stvari...mada mislim da bi i mogla da se uklopi u kontekst nekog benda...mada ovako zasebno deluje mi.....recimo, prazno.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SelfHandOfGod Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 jebo' vas pravopis... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
...m... Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 (edited) pa...ne bas nas... no...verujem da je ovo bio lapsus...( a meni je samo bilo zabavno sto se ovde svi utrkuju da istaknu kako su 'upoznati' sa tom famoznom gramatikom.....) Edited April 28, 2006 by ...m... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sonja Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 ooo hvala ti Boze...neko bar pravi razliku izmedju pravopisa i gramatike... ovde sve strucnjak do strucnjaka... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 Pravopis je isto included .... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sonja Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 zna se sta se podrazumeva pod terminom - pravopisna greska, a sta pod - gramaticka greska... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gavrosaurus Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 Још једна депресивна песма ... Недовршена ... Очајна ... Коментари такође ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted April 28, 2006 Report post Posted April 28, 2006 @Sonja- naravno da su to dv razlichita termina, ali.... svejedno. Treba da pazi na obe stvari. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
шмизла Posted April 29, 2006 Report post Posted April 29, 2006 ne svidja mi se pogotovo ta fraza na ocetku a ideja jeste dobra i podseca na ekv - "Ja nisam ni tamo ni ovde" npr. (pored samog naziva) a sto se gramatike tice jeste to bitno, ali to se lako da nauciti... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SelfHandOfGod Posted April 29, 2006 Report post Posted April 29, 2006 @Sonja- naravno da su to dv razlichita termina, ali.... svejedno. Treba da pazi na obe stvari. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted April 29, 2006 Report post Posted April 29, 2006 @Tea - ne znam koliko je lako... gledaj koliko mi uchimo..pa opet ne nauchimo. No..da se nauchiti @Prepotentni autor- OK. Dobio si jednu vrlo konstruktivnu kritiku, koja ce ti sluzhiti u opshtoj klutluri, ne treba zato da bacash pegle i udarash glavom o zid- nego se baci na posao... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SelfHandOfGod Posted April 29, 2006 Report post Posted April 29, 2006 (edited) klutluri eeeeeee moja kulturo dete vrati se u krevet... Edited April 29, 2006 by SelfHandOfGod Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted April 29, 2006 Report post Posted April 29, 2006 Moje brzo kucanje nema vezze sa gramatikom. Zato. Ja sam ti dala najiskreniji savet, ti radi shta hocesh. U sushtini zabole me. Necu da dobijem warn, modovi su posatli opasni. bye. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SelfHandOfGod Posted May 1, 2006 Report post Posted May 1, 2006 da Natalia posebno, od kad je mod nece ni da odgovori Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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