VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted November 1, 2006 Report post Posted November 1, 2006 Inercija Pogledaj me! Čini li ti se poznatim ovaj osmeh? Ovaj blago iskrivljeni osmeh, koji priča Razvio je sopstveni jezik Jezik osmeha. Hoćeš časove mog jezika? Ili jezika mog osmeha? Da. Uvek sam bila tako bolesna. I tako brutalna. Ja te samo volim na sve načine Ali najlepši si kada si go. I, tako nevino spreman za mene Osećaš li inerciju? Hajde, pokreni me. Prelomi me. U tvojim rukama ja sam savitljiva pozorišna lutka, Ona, koja je od krpe i tkanine koja se cepa Savij me. Uradi sa mnom šta želiš. Nemojte me okovati. Zar da dozvolim da budem okovana od već porobljenih? Od klaustrofobične mase savijenih ljudi? Hajde, pokloni mi se kao i pre. Da se igramo svesno Igre koja se zove „samopoštovanje“ Veruj mi. Jednom kad se pogledaš u ogledalo, ako naučiš da se igraš Igra „samopoštovanja“ zvaće se „poštovanje“. Ah, genije moj u ogledalu.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
tovar Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 simpaticno. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zlockica Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 Veoma i bas mi se svidja. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gavrosaurus Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 Mnogo ima snage u tebi. Mnogo ljubavi i celo more dasaka, plocica, eksera, krpa, lutki, carsava, klupa, sandala, cokolade ... Ti si, bre, rodjeni scenograf! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 Hvala Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
STARSHOOTER_SUPREME Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 (edited) Paznja paznja !!! Ma koliko da su lanci cvrsti, Zagrljaj tvoj daje mi krila.... Krila!Da poletim i ponesem te kroz snove Ma koliko da su lanci hladni, Vrelina tvog poljupca ih oblikuje OBlikuje,u mali sendvic sa suvim mesom koji trenutno delimo Edited November 2, 2006 by STARSHOOTER_SUPREME Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Smuggler Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 Heh jepa pesmica, naslov je super Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenenn Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 Pretpostavljam da si slucajno pogresila, ali zar posle recenice u imperativu ne stoji uzvicnik? Pesma kao pesma mi se ne svidja neshto posebno. Lichi mi pomalo na Any jino stvaranje koje si iskritikovala. Dobro, zrelije je, ali se svodi na isto. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 @nesha- @old smugg- Hvala! @greenen-Pa i ne lichi bash. Svodi se na isto? Pa, pobogu, svaka ppesma koja je ljubavna se svodi na isto. Dodushe, ova moja ima i politichku konotaciju koja je slojevno uklopljena u te, let's say love-perv delove. ali, hvala! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
STARSHOOTER_SUPREME Posted November 2, 2006 Report post Posted November 2, 2006 Koj ti je taj nesha? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted November 3, 2006 Report post Posted November 3, 2006 Ne znam ja Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
НС 14-8-8 Posted November 3, 2006 Report post Posted November 3, 2006 Ona, koja je od krpe i tkanine koja se cepa Savij me. u ovom redosledu mi se nesto i ne dopada.ne znam sta......ali...npr 1.Ona, koja je od krpe tkanine koja se cepa Savij me. 2.Ona, koja je od krpe i tkanine koja se cepa Savij me. inace deluje OK Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted November 3, 2006 Report post Posted November 3, 2006 Hm.. razumem.. Ako si mislio na metriku. Ja apsolutno rushim sva pravila I samo slobodan stih ALi , hvala, naravno Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Милица Posted November 5, 2006 Report post Posted November 5, 2006 Meni se ovo dopada. Nevezano za ljubavnu tematiku, ima i nekih da kazem - "zivotnih istina" u sebi... Lepo. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helle Posted November 8, 2006 Report post Posted November 8, 2006 Savij me.... jedan cHvrst zagrljaj, za ovako divnu pijesmu! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Princess Posted November 9, 2006 Report post Posted November 9, 2006 Bravo. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted November 9, 2006 Report post Posted November 9, 2006 Danke!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth Posted November 14, 2006 Report post Posted November 14, 2006 lepo bogami. ti bi trebala da izdas neku knjigu da se tvoj talenat malo pokaze masi... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted November 14, 2006 Report post Posted November 14, 2006 Ou, to je bash kompliment . Hvala. I'll think about that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deftone Posted January 4, 2007 Report post Posted January 4, 2007 Veruj mi. Jednom kad se pogledaš u ogledalo, ako naučiš da se igraš Igra „samopoštovanja“ zvaće se „poštovanje“. Ah, genije moj u ogledalu.. ...ne znam zasto, ali ovih par stihova mi se zaista dopadaju. nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted January 4, 2007 Report post Posted January 4, 2007 Hvala Ja znam zashto ti se dopadaju, hehe, shalim se Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deftone Posted January 5, 2007 Report post Posted January 5, 2007 Hvala Ja znam zashto ti se dopadaju, hehe, shalim se Ne salis se! Zasto? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
+AuReOlE= Posted January 24, 2007 Report post Posted January 24, 2007 zanimljiva pesma..a i naslov...nego odaj mi tajnu i reci-napisi svoje uzore(pisce.knjige) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mustang Posted February 14, 2008 Report post Posted February 14, 2008 Inercija... Bitna stvar u muško-ženskim odnosima Nevertheless dobra pesma. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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