STARSHOOTER_SUPREME Posted October 28, 2007 Report post Posted October 28, 2007 Ugao Rukom iskopan ugao, pravo je skloniste za molitvu.... Nema lutanja nema zivota, samo izbledjene ivice do neba telom si gradila, suzama malterisala sitnice tako lako prekrivene.. Zar se ne secas rashirenih ruku i osmeha koji miluje? Zar nista ne osecas kad se setis slucajnih susreta? zar vishe ne sanjas da te neko cuva pored jastuka Zar se ne secas slobodnog prostora gde smo na kraju oboje zalutali? Zagrli me kao nekada i nikad te necu pustiti da propadnes Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peti.Maj Posted November 1, 2007 Report post Posted November 1, 2007 Zanimljiva pjesma. Kao da je napisana 'u jednom dahu'... a mozda se i varam. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
STARSHOOTER_SUPREME Posted November 2, 2007 Report post Posted November 2, 2007 Izdahu... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vule iz Kule Posted November 2, 2007 Report post Posted November 2, 2007 Jednostavna ali fina pesma... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Милица Posted November 27, 2007 Report post Posted November 27, 2007 Ono "malterisala" malo ometa utisak, iako mi je jasno zasto tu stoji. Mozda bi "ucvrstila" ili tako nesto, malo vise poeticno, bolje stajalo tu. Sto se ostalih stvari tice, nemam zamerku, iskreno je, lepo napisano i svidja mi se. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
шмизла Posted December 2, 2007 Report post Posted December 2, 2007 (edited) zar vishe ne sanjas da te neko cuva pored jastuka ... Zagrli me kao nekada i nikad te necu pustiti da propadnes :cry: Edited December 2, 2007 by шмизла Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted December 3, 2007 Report post Posted December 3, 2007 Izvoli osmeh ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell on Earth Posted December 3, 2007 Report post Posted December 3, 2007 Brate, nemoj biti mlakonja. Ovakve pesme pisu samo papucari i ljudi sa slabom licnoscu. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZheX Posted December 3, 2007 Report post Posted December 3, 2007 dodajem uz prethodni post, i istripovane ribe.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted December 3, 2007 Report post Posted December 3, 2007 Dodajem i ja - i ljudi koji vole. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell on Earth Posted December 3, 2007 Report post Posted December 3, 2007 Kako je to dirljivo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeronikaJeOdluchilaDaUmre Posted December 3, 2007 Report post Posted December 3, 2007 Mhm- steta sto i ti nemas nekog Necu da spamujem ovde vise Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lakšmi Posted December 4, 2007 Report post Posted December 4, 2007 Evo, KONAČNO ovde da pročitam i nešto što valja! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bejbe Kompajler Posted January 21, 2008 Report post Posted January 21, 2008 owo je prediwno.. podsetja me na neka wremena.. i na to koliko sam sada prokleto sretjna! swaka chast, nashwrljaj josh neshto owdi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
B@K@ Posted January 21, 2008 Report post Posted January 21, 2008 Nergalac? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
STARSHOOTER_SUPREME Posted January 30, 2008 Report post Posted January 30, 2008 Des B@K@C Si josh mator? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azizam Posted January 31, 2008 Report post Posted January 31, 2008 ah, lovelorn fino, negde je tako dobro utegnuta pesma a negde me izgubiš baš je lepo, pisati "za malo moje" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
B@K@ Posted January 31, 2008 Report post Posted January 31, 2008 Des B@K@C Si josh mator? Jok, batice, evo pupim... A lipo, lipo... osećajno... tko bi rek'o da ti tako... prožimaš... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Senka_84 Posted January 31, 2008 Report post Posted January 31, 2008 Uh evo citam redom pesmice i ova mi se stvarno najvishe svidja... Decko volela bih da procitam josh tvojih radova? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
B@K@ Posted February 1, 2008 Report post Posted February 1, 2008 hehe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
nenad_pa Posted February 16, 2008 Report post Posted February 16, 2008 gay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabrielle Posted April 8, 2008 Report post Posted April 8, 2008 Zao mi je sto neko ne razume poeziju,ali ako vas ne interesuje i ne razumete temu nemojte ni davati svoje glupave komentare... sto se pesme tice,zaista je napisana u "izdahu",prilicno jejednostavno,ali zar nisu u stvari najbolje stvari-jednostavne... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstralliS Posted April 9, 2008 Report post Posted April 9, 2008 Neko ne razume ni samog sebe, tako da o tim ljudima ne treba trošiti reči. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
vudun Posted April 9, 2008 Report post Posted April 9, 2008 Nije loše - đasvi mi se. Samo, EKV bi sve to još dodatno ''začinio'' stilskim figurama! ehh što ne lipše Karleuš Jelenić - a ne ovak'i bendovi da iščezavaju... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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