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RAMBO!
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ova nastala pre pola sata...znam da ima greshaka,nije mi dobar engleski(ispravite ako ima greshaka(ima ih :) )):

MASSACRE-NO BOUNDAIRES

 

KILLING IS MY JOB

WORKIN HARDLY EVERY DAY

NOW I AM ADULT MAN

ONE WICTIM ISN'T ENOUGHT

EVERY DAY FAMMILE ONE

ITS MY DOSE OF BLOOD

LOOK AT YOURSELF

YOU PITFUEL THINK THAT YOU ARE MURDER

ONLY FEW SECOND

YOU WAS DRUNK IN AFFECT

KILLING ONLY ONE MAN

AND YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THE EVIL MEAN

MASSACRE IS MY DAILY THING

MY LIFE IS PURE EVIL

I DON'T KNOW FOR HAPPYNESS

AND FOR EMOTION

COLD LIKE STONE

WHEN I KILLING

POLICE ARE UNEFFECTIVE HUNTING

CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE

INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE

LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH

I AM PURE DRIVE

I AM PURE WISH FOR...

MASSACRE!

 

MASSACRE!

 

MASSACRE!

 

MA-SSA-CRE!

 

JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK;

YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS!

 

(DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK?

TURN AROUND,LOOK IN THE EYES OF DEATH,

SOON YOU AND ALL YOU LOV WOULD'T BE ALIVE

LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP,

EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!) :violent:

 

 

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    Ja ne znam engleski, prevedi na srpski, mozda i dam komentar.

    Majko moja!

     

    Maaaajko moja!

    sta je ovo koju picku materinu, ko je pis'o ovaj tekst!

    sta da ti kazem, nista posebno...

     

    kao ni ovo sto sam ja napisao

    jos jedna obrada od mene (ima jos jedna na temi "moja pesma")

     

     

    Maaaajko moja!

    koja OVO JE budalastina!

     

    Pamet.... sta je to kog djavola?

    inteligencija nam nije jaca strana (nestala?)

    Buducnost za nas nije problem - nemamo je

    mislimo samo sta cemo da pijemo i duvamo

    samo zatvori oci i prepusti se carima koje ti pruzaju pivo i trava

    potpunu slobodu i svu srecu!

    to je ono zasto

    nas ne razumeju, ne vole!

    Ponekad mislim da je nasa misija nemoguca, a onda popijem par piva,

    znaci i vizija mi kazu da ce nas neko razumeti

    ali to ce biti samo jedan

     

    Maaaajko moja! - zajedno smo ovde (niko nas ne razume)

    Maaaajko moja! - sto koju picku materinu ja pevam ovo!?

     

    (Satyricon - Mother North cover)

     

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    ova nastala pre pola sata...znam da ima greshaka,nije mi dobar engleski(ispravite ako ima greshaka(ima ih :) )):

    MASSACRE-NO BOUNDAIRES

     

    KILLING IS MY JOB

    WORKIN HARDLY EVERY DAY

    NOW I AM ADULT MAN

    ONE WICTIM ISN'T ENOUGHT

    EVERY DAY FAMMILE ONE

    ITS MY DOSE OF BLOOD

    LOOK AT YOURSELF

    YOU PITFUEL THINK THAT YOU ARE MURDER

    ONLY FEW SECOND

    YOU WAS DRUNK IN AFFECT

    KILLING ONLY ONE MAN

    AND YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THE EVIL MEAN

    MASSACRE IS MY DAILY THING

    MY LIFE IS PURE EVIL

    I DON'T KNOW FOR HAPPYNESS

    AND FOR EMOTION

    COLD LIKE STONE

    WHEN I KILLING

    POLICE ARE UNEFFECTIVE HUNTING

    CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE

    INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE

    LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH

    I AM PURE DRIVE

    I AM PURE WISH FOR...

    MASSACRE!

     

    MASSACRE!

     

    MASSACRE!

     

    MA-SSA-CRE!

     

    JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK;

    YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS!

     

    (DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK?

    TURN AROUND,LOOK IN THE EYES OF DEATH,

    SOON YOU AND ALL YOU LOV WOULD'T BE ALIVE

    LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP,

    EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!) :violent:

    Najvecha greshka je shto si se odvazhio da postujesh....

    Hahahahaha!!! :) :) :)

    Ovo je toliko debilno da je sjajno... Molim te reci samo da se zajebavas, i svaka ti cast u tom slucaju...

     

    A greske su ti neverovatne... Mada, bilo bi steta da ih ispravis, ovako se zaista postize pun efekat... Savrseno idu uz ovakvu pesmu... :)

    Немој да те обесхрабре ови хејтери. Само настави да пишеш и читај, читај, читај... Нарочито упутства за веш машине и садржај шампона и козметике док седиш на шољи. Aјс је то урадио па је направио хит - "Фелче азуро, паљери ди бањо, туто ил копро мон вида парфумато, ликвидо сапоне, секрето моменто, дуе тре, кватро тре, ћинквећенто". Не сумњам да ћеш наћи инспирацију за квалитетнија дела од овог твог (ако је то уопште могуће)...

    Држ' се Рамбо! Сам против свих, тако си увек и радио!

    Edited by Axeanosilas

    CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE

    INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE

    LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH

    I AM PURE DRIVE

     

    JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK;

    YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS!

     

    (DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK?

     

    LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP,

    EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!)

     

    :)

    Još uvijek kontempliram kako je neko mogao napisati nešto ovoliko fantastično. :)

    Боундаирес!

     

    Рамбо је цар. Нарочито у трећој изведби. :)

     

     
    :)

    Još uvijek kontempliram kako je neko mogao napisati nešto ovoliko fantastično. :)

    :lol: :lol: Umirem :lol: :lol:
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    Sudeci po rokovniku,pardon postovima,vidim da vam se jako dopadaju moji stihovi.

     

    Tako i treba da bude jer RAMBO restura!!!!

     

    Ochekujte uskoro novu pesmu,punu nasilja,straha,sviperog ponashanja i ubijanja!!!

     

    buahahahaha!

    :veseli:

    Jedva cekam!!! Ali nemoj da bude losija od ove... Nemoj slucajno da bi se priblizavao engleskim recnicima i gramatikama dok je ne napises, ne bih zelela da uniste tvoj stvaralacki zanos nekim prizemnim stvarima kao npr. pravopis, slaganje vremena, red reci u recenici i slicno...

    I naravno, nadam se da ces i u svom drugom remek-delu ostati ovako beskompromisan i opasan po zivote smrtnika, kao i u prvom :pivopije:
    Ochekujte uskoro novu pesmu,punu nasilja,straha,sviperog ponashanja i ubijanja!!!

    Животе мој напаћени,

    сунце смисла огреја те!!!

     

     

    Пожури молим те, не дозволи да изгорим(о) од ишчекивања.

    Блек метал ист криг!

    Edited by Axeanosilas

    AM I EWILL? YESS I AM!

     

     

    :zuba:

     

     

     

    ... ubaci i zaklane jariće, više gromova i munja, i poneku nesretnu devicu!

     

     

    PoZ!

    Још само да додам да ти је место у издању које буде обрађивало период између 1920 и 2010 загарантовано. Небитно што пишеш на енглеском.

     

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    Edited by Axeanosilas

    Napred Rambo, svim srcem smo uz tebe i sa velikim zarom iscekujemo novu pesmu. Pozuri molim te.

    Nishta ti to nevalja dechko! moracesh kod marine tucakovic, malo na obuku.
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    ... ubaci i zaklane jariće,

    ima jarica(na engleskom se kazu bily-goat da se zna!),i to ne bilo kakvih,nego religiozno orijentisanih :pivopije:

     

    UPCOMIG' DEVASTATION

     

    SOMETIMES I CATCH MYSELF

    LOOK TROO WINDOW HAPPY FAMILLIE

    THEY DID NOT KNOW,THEY DID NOT ANTICIPATE

    AN UPCOMING DEVASTATION THAT NEAR

    I ENTER TROO WALL,SPEED OF LIGHT

    BEFORE THEY REALIZE WHAT IS HAPPEN

    THEY ARE DEAD

    FOWL BAWL IN THE GARDEN

    BULETS IS MAKE RED PARADE IN AIR

    LED IS IN THE EVERY ROOM

    SCREAMS EXITS FROMS DYINGS BODIES

    I DRINK MY DOUSE OF DEADLY FEAR

    LIFE ARE SPIL ON THE GRUOND

    LEAK TOGETER WITH BLOOD

    NOW YOUR SOULS FELL UNLIMITED PAIN

    YOU LOOK YOUR CHILDREN DYING

    YOU LOKK THEM LITTLE EYES,LAST TIME OPEN

    SOON YOUR SOULS FALL INTO AMBISS OF DEATH

    WORLD OF ETERNAL SILENCE-YOR ONLY HOPE

    BRUTAL IS TOTAL

    BLOD FALL FROM NOW MOTLEY CEILING

    THAT FALL ON MY HAND WHICH ARE PRES TRIGER

    TRIGER THAT SEAL YOUR DESTINI

    NOW LIFE LEAVED THAT HOUSE

    BUT IS IN THE ME IS STILL MORE ANGER

    THIS JOB ISNT SATISFAJA MY KILL DESIRE

    I WILL BORED SO I DEICIDE

    TO SHOOT IN THEY DEAD BODIES

    TO COMPARE HOUSE WITH GROUND

    NO STONE TO STONE TO STAY ON

    CAUSE BORED PRIEST AND LITLE BILY-GOAT BAPTIZE :violent:

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    I eto nama jos jednog masterpiece-a! Svaka cast Rambo, samo tako nastavi, cekamo nove pesme!

    Е јебига, прва му је била више труе!

     

    Ова има доста мање грешака у компарацији са оном .... с' претходне стране.

     

     

     

     
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