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ova nastala pre pola sata...znam da ima greshaka,nije mi dobar engleski(ispravite ako ima greshaka(ima ih :) )):

MASSACRE-NO BOUNDAIRES

 

KILLING IS MY JOB

WORKIN HARDLY EVERY DAY

NOW I AM ADULT MAN

ONE WICTIM ISN'T ENOUGHT

EVERY DAY FAMMILE ONE

ITS MY DOSE OF BLOOD

LOOK AT YOURSELF

YOU PITFUEL THINK THAT YOU ARE MURDER

ONLY FEW SECOND

YOU WAS DRUNK IN AFFECT

KILLING ONLY ONE MAN

AND YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THE EVIL MEAN

MASSACRE IS MY DAILY THING

MY LIFE IS PURE EVIL

I DON'T KNOW FOR HAPPYNESS

AND FOR EMOTION

COLD LIKE STONE

WHEN I KILLING

POLICE ARE UNEFFECTIVE HUNTING

CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE

INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE

LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH

I AM PURE DRIVE

I AM PURE WISH FOR...

MASSACRE!

 

MASSACRE!

 

MASSACRE!

 

MA-SSA-CRE!

 

JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK;

YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS!

 

(DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK?

TURN AROUND,LOOK IN THE EYES OF DEATH,

SOON YOU AND ALL YOU LOV WOULD'T BE ALIVE

LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP,

EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!) :violent:

 

 

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  • 3 months later...

Majko moja!

 

Maaaajko moja!

sta je ovo koju picku materinu, ko je pis'o ovaj tekst!

sta da ti kazem, nista posebno...

 

kao ni ovo sto sam ja napisao

jos jedna obrada od mene (ima jos jedna na temi "moja pesma")

 

 

Maaaajko moja!

koja OVO JE budalastina!

 

Pamet.... sta je to kog djavola?

inteligencija nam nije jaca strana (nestala?)

Buducnost za nas nije problem - nemamo je

mislimo samo sta cemo da pijemo i duvamo

samo zatvori oci i prepusti se carima koje ti pruzaju pivo i trava

potpunu slobodu i svu srecu!

to je ono zasto

nas ne razumeju, ne vole!

Ponekad mislim da je nasa misija nemoguca, a onda popijem par piva,

znaci i vizija mi kazu da ce nas neko razumeti

ali to ce biti samo jedan

 

Maaaajko moja! - zajedno smo ovde (niko nas ne razume)

Maaaajko moja! - sto koju picku materinu ja pevam ovo!?

 

(Satyricon - Mother North cover)

 

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ova nastala pre pola sata...znam da ima greshaka,nije mi dobar engleski(ispravite ako ima greshaka(ima ih :) )):

MASSACRE-NO BOUNDAIRES

 

KILLING IS MY JOB

WORKIN HARDLY EVERY DAY

NOW I AM ADULT MAN

ONE WICTIM ISN'T ENOUGHT

EVERY DAY FAMMILE ONE

ITS MY DOSE OF BLOOD

LOOK AT YOURSELF

YOU PITFUEL THINK THAT YOU ARE MURDER

ONLY FEW SECOND

YOU WAS DRUNK IN AFFECT

KILLING ONLY ONE MAN

AND YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THE EVIL MEAN

MASSACRE IS MY DAILY THING

MY LIFE IS PURE EVIL

I DON'T KNOW FOR HAPPYNESS

AND FOR EMOTION

COLD LIKE STONE

WHEN I KILLING

POLICE ARE UNEFFECTIVE HUNTING

CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE

INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE

LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH

I AM PURE DRIVE

I AM PURE WISH FOR...

MASSACRE!

 

MASSACRE!

 

MASSACRE!

 

MA-SSA-CRE!

 

JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK;

YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS!

 

(DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK?

TURN AROUND,LOOK IN THE EYES OF DEATH,

SOON YOU AND ALL YOU LOV WOULD'T BE ALIVE

LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP,

EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!) :violent:

Najvecha greshka je shto si se odvazhio da postujesh....

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Hahahahaha!!! :) :) :)

Ovo je toliko debilno da je sjajno... Molim te reci samo da se zajebavas, i svaka ti cast u tom slucaju...

 

A greske su ti neverovatne... Mada, bilo bi steta da ih ispravis, ovako se zaista postize pun efekat... Savrseno idu uz ovakvu pesmu... :)

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Немој да те обесхрабре ови хејтери. Само настави да пишеш и читај, читај, читај... Нарочито упутства за веш машине и садржај шампона и козметике док седиш на шољи. Aјс је то урадио па је направио хит - "Фелче азуро, паљери ди бањо, туто ил копро мон вида парфумато, ликвидо сапоне, секрето моменто, дуе тре, кватро тре, ћинквећенто". Не сумњам да ћеш наћи инспирацију за квалитетнија дела од овог твог (ако је то уопште могуће)...

Држ' се Рамбо! Сам против свих, тако си увек и радио!

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CAUSE AM I NOW INNVISIBLE

INNVISIBLE LIKE DRIVE

LIKE DRIVE FOR DEATH

I AM PURE DRIVE

 

JUGDEING BY MY NOTEBOOK;

YOU WILL BE DEATH BY THE CHRISTMAS!

 

(DO YOU FEEL WIND IN YOUR NECK?

 

LOOK IN ME,I WANT TO SOAP,

EVERY ATOM OF DEADLY FEAR!)

 

:)

Još uvijek kontempliram kako je neko mogao napisati nešto ovoliko fantastično. :)

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:veseli:

Jedva cekam!!! Ali nemoj da bude losija od ove... Nemoj slucajno da bi se priblizavao engleskim recnicima i gramatikama dok je ne napises, ne bih zelela da uniste tvoj stvaralacki zanos nekim prizemnim stvarima kao npr. pravopis, slaganje vremena, red reci u recenici i slicno...

I naravno, nadam se da ces i u svom drugom remek-delu ostati ovako beskompromisan i opasan po zivote smrtnika, kao i u prvom :pivopije:

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Ochekujte uskoro novu pesmu,punu nasilja,straha,sviperog ponashanja i ubijanja!!!

Животе мој напаћени,

сунце смисла огреја те!!!

 

 

Пожури молим те, не дозволи да изгорим(о) од ишчекивања.

Блек метал ист криг!

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Још само да додам да ти је место у издању које буде обрађивало период између 1920 и 2010 загарантовано. Небитно што пишеш на енглеском.

 

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... ubaci i zaklane jariće,

ima jarica(na engleskom se kazu bily-goat da se zna!),i to ne bilo kakvih,nego religiozno orijentisanih :pivopije:

 

UPCOMIG' DEVASTATION

 

SOMETIMES I CATCH MYSELF

LOOK TROO WINDOW HAPPY FAMILLIE

THEY DID NOT KNOW,THEY DID NOT ANTICIPATE

AN UPCOMING DEVASTATION THAT NEAR

I ENTER TROO WALL,SPEED OF LIGHT

BEFORE THEY REALIZE WHAT IS HAPPEN

THEY ARE DEAD

FOWL BAWL IN THE GARDEN

BULETS IS MAKE RED PARADE IN AIR

LED IS IN THE EVERY ROOM

SCREAMS EXITS FROMS DYINGS BODIES

I DRINK MY DOUSE OF DEADLY FEAR

LIFE ARE SPIL ON THE GRUOND

LEAK TOGETER WITH BLOOD

NOW YOUR SOULS FELL UNLIMITED PAIN

YOU LOOK YOUR CHILDREN DYING

YOU LOKK THEM LITTLE EYES,LAST TIME OPEN

SOON YOUR SOULS FALL INTO AMBISS OF DEATH

WORLD OF ETERNAL SILENCE-YOR ONLY HOPE

BRUTAL IS TOTAL

BLOD FALL FROM NOW MOTLEY CEILING

THAT FALL ON MY HAND WHICH ARE PRES TRIGER

TRIGER THAT SEAL YOUR DESTINI

NOW LIFE LEAVED THAT HOUSE

BUT IS IN THE ME IS STILL MORE ANGER

THIS JOB ISNT SATISFAJA MY KILL DESIRE

I WILL BORED SO I DEICIDE

TO SHOOT IN THEY DEAD BODIES

TO COMPARE HOUSE WITH GROUND

NO STONE TO STONE TO STAY ON

CAUSE BORED PRIEST AND LITLE BILY-GOAT BAPTIZE :violent:

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Е јебига, прва му је била више труе!

 

Ова има доста мање грешака у компарацији са оном .... с' претходне стране.

 

 

 

 

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